JEEZ, and all this time I thought you were writing an academic paper :) In that case, THROW OUT all references to Jung and myth crits. That would be good if you Were Indeed writing an academic paper. And Toss Out Scottie's reference to the Neo-Freudian eclectics. That is indeed the direction psychology seems to be taking, but it has nothing to do with either the academic paper I thought you were writing or your fiction work. The question I have to ask you RE your character's motivation...what does that have to do with the leggy blonde? You're externalizing the guy's motivation. I like leggy blondes too, but not necessarily in the same way or for the same reasons (ALRIGHT, not for ALL the SAME reasons, although at least for SOME of the SAME Reasons -- lest Scottie accuse me of parthenogeniture :) ), someone else might. In other words, if the guy is indeed moved to "drastic measures," it's not just because of a leggy blonde. It's because of his history. You need to get to know your character better, give him a childhood, a background, a source of his emotional needs. Why leggy blondes in particular? Why do YOU prefer leggy blondes in particular? See, I like leggy blondes, but I also like short brunettes, medium height redheads, am a true sinophile when it comes to females, and have found many an african attractive as well. So, examine your own motivations... Jim ___________________________________________________________________ You don't need to buy Internet access to use free Internet e-mail. Get completely free e-mail from Juno at http://www.juno.com/getjuno.html or call Juno at (800) 654-JUNO [654-5866]