Re: argh!
Emily Friedman (bananafish_9@yahoo.com)
Sat, 06 Mar 1999 10:22:57 -0800 (PST)
Don't worry about it, I'm sure your rewrite will be great. I have been
in similar situations before. Good luck!
-Liz Friedman
---Clumsy9irl@aol.com wrote:
>
> If only I felt as if I could past my paper...I got it back from my
teacher
> today, and she completely ripped it apart. She said I had no main
focus, was
> repetitive, and that I said nothing about Salinger's style. But
see, she
> approved my 3 page outline...all she told me to do was add one idea
in my
> thesis..I did..and when I got my paper back , that part was
underlined and she
> asked why it was there. Argh! She told me to put it there in the
first place.
> She underlined and crossed out most of it, so I guess I'm back to
the drawing
> boards and have to rewrite all of it again. I'm soo cheesed. I was
about to
> cry when I got it back in class...and I've never come close to
crying before
> in school. She basically said it sucked..Out of 2 honors american lit
> classes, she only liked one person's paper at all..and while we're
writing
> these, we also did a unit of poetry and now we're reading Huckleberry
> Finn...ugh..sorry..had to vent..I've been mad all day...ciao!
> ~Meredith
>
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