I was just looking through my thesis (which I haven't done for ages, not even when I posted it to Bananafish I think) and a couple of things occured to me. The main thing was - Salinger originally seems to have totally abandoned the Zen dictum that wisdom be conveyed in `as few words as possible'. Progressively. We can generally say that his later work is a lot longer-winded than his earlier work. The first line of the first story `The Young Folks' has often cited as an example of text book short story writing - the main character's world, character and attitude are established in the first sentence. However, `Hapworth 16' would have to be diametric opposite to this. You don't get a huge sense that Salinger wishes to parcel thoughts into convenient carry-size as he once did. Zen dictates that we not rely on words to convey meaning - hence Buddy's `blank page' enclosed in the cigar box `as way of explanation'. I wonder why this is? I think it's a shame as some of his earlier work has such a workmanlike compactness to it, just like a haiku. Why? Is his long windedness his response to the conundrum of the writer who can use few or no words? Camille verona_beach@geocities.com @ THE ARTS HOLE http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Theater/6442 @ THE INVERTED FOREST http://www.angelfire.com/pa/invertedforest