Jim, Thanks, many thanks, for taking the trouble to *actually read* my posts. Really! I spent most of this morning on a long letter to a friend. Then banged out the terse replies to "S: A Continuation." And am in the midst of changing medications. Which is to say, I will read over yours of below, again, maybe reread Bananafish & pertinent parts in SAI and Hapworth, and then try and respond. This might take more than a few days. yours, without answers, Bruce -----Original Message----- From: AntiUtopia@aol.com <AntiUtopia@aol.com> To: bananafish@lists.nyu.edu <bananafish@lists.nyu.edu> Date: Monday, October 11, 1999 12:27 PM Subject: Re: Seymour: A Continuation >In a message dated 10/11/99 2:35:07 PM Eastern Daylight Time, >citycabn@gateway.net writes: > ><< > Jim, > I personally don't think JDS painted himself into a corner. Think the > critics, etc. alight on S.'s suicide and tried to beat JDS over the head > with it along the lines of how can S. be so great if he committed suicide. > To my mind, JDS/Buddy tells us why S. committed suicide in SAI. The entire > prelude is about this. And ends with the section re the cororner's report, > whether it is consumption, loneliness or suicide: > > "isn't it plain how the true artist-seer actually dies? I say (and > everything that follows in these pages all too possibly stands or falls on > my being at least *nearly* right)--I say that the true artist-seer, the > heavenly fool who can and does produce beauty, is mainly dazzled to death by > his own scruples, the blinding shapes and colors of his own sacred human > conscience." >> > >hmm...then I'm not sure I understood the following paragraphs: > ><<Certainly S. exists. He exists in the books, and in the minds and hearts of >faithful Glass readers. I suggest not to overemphasize the suicide. JDS >has to deal with the suicide *because* that is where he started in '48. >Seymour, as Seymour presented in '55 to '65, did not yet exist. But since >he has, so to speak, painted himself in a corner from the outset, given the >fact of S.'s suicide, JDS does have to go back to it. The entire prelude to >SAI is an attempt to "correct" the status of the suicide in his readers' >minds. Someone commits suicide in the West and everyone is up in arms, >feeling it negates the person's entire life. --Bruce>> > >See, here it seems like you're saying JDS has to go back to Seymour's suicide >to defend Seymour against the "little mindedness" of western critics who >think that Seymour isn't that great for committing suicide -- and in This way >Salinger painted himself into a corner. > >So while you are saying essentially the same thing now that you did in the >earlier post, you did say in the earlier post that Salinger painted himself >into a corner with Seymour's suicide. > >But the problem I think with the ideas presented is that you marginalize the >death, when I think it is indeed central to Salinger thematically. > >The following paragraphs are from that original post too: > ><<So Hapworth could be >>justified perhaps as part of Buddy's attempt to unravel the origins of >>whatever led Seymour to suicide. --Camille > >Seymour himself mentions in the letter that he won't live longer than a >well-preserved telephone pole. It ain't a big deal. Hapworth, I'll say it >again, is to show the reader that Seymour grew, developed, and became the >Seymour of the poems, parables, and anecdotes. I imagine Christ Himself or >Buddha weren't great shakes at seven, and their Hapworth letters would be >flawed, too. -- Bruce>> > >I don't think anyone's saying the Hapworth letters are flawed. My problem is >that they're not flawed enough. Too much light and brilliance for a seven >year old. Too mature a prose style, too well read, too too much of >everything **good**. > >Jim >